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Dedicated to Danielle...

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All along it was a fever
A cold sweat hot-headed believer
I threw my hands in the air, said, "Show me something,"
She said, "If you dare come a little closer."

Round and around and around and around we go
Oh now, tell me now, tell me now, tell me now you know.

Not really sure how to feel about it.
Every little thing you say.
Makes me feel like I can't live without you.
It takes me all the way.
I want you to stay

It's not much of a life I'm living
It's not just something I take – it's given

Round and around and around and around we go
Oh now, tell me now, tell me now, tell me now you know.

Not really sure how to feel about it.
Every little thing you say
Makes me feel like I can't live without you.
It takes me all the way.
I want you to stay.

Ooh, ooh, ooh, the reason I hold on
Ooh, ooh, ooh, 'cause I need this hole gone
Funny you're the broken one but I'm the only one you could relate to.
The trolls, the so called friends, and everyone else you can't seem debate to.

Not really sure how to feel about it.
Every little thing you say
Makes me feel like I can't live without you.
It takes me all the way.
I want you to stay, stay.
I want you to stay, oh.
Yes, I wrote a rewrite of a mainstream song. Sue me.

Anyway, this is dedicated to :iconcatthylove: or :iconxaprilyne: or whatever you want to call her. She cancelled her DA account and said she might not ever be back. In all honestly, I don't blame her but... and maybe it sounds selfish of me, but she was like a best friend to me.

For starters, she is one of the few atheists that doesn't scrutinise me for being christian.
She doesn't give me shit for being obsessed with Harry Potter... mostly because she's an HP fan herself.
Overall, she treated me with respect.
I saw a lot of myself in her and vice versa.
Her and I became besties fast. She understands me which is more than I can say for almost anyone else.

Maybe one day I'll sing this... when I stop crying, of course.
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NeutraStaff's avatar
Nice poem but the message it presents, well... It's like this, no one should rely on someone too much. It's good to love people but it's not good to let that love consume you, to become too attached so it makes separations harder.